Puppetdance~Shadowclan

[Puppet]

Kit Name: Puppetkit
Apprentice Name: Puppetpaw
Warrior Name: Puppetdance
Clan:Shadowclan
Age: 20 moons
Gender: She-cat
Description:

Puppetdance is a very slender she-cat with pretty ice blue eyes. She has a light grey mask that covers her nose and part of her ce.Her ears are almond shaped and semi long, almost rabbit like. Her nose is a soft pink color, and berry-like. Her ce is perfectly chiseled and curved, with a calm presence. Her whiskers are a long silvery white that touch her shoulder blades, with a pretty curve. Her pelt his mainly a soft snowy white color, that is semi-long in length. Her pelt shines a unique shimmer when any light touches it, especially moonlight.

Her eyes are a gorgeous icy blue, that shimmers like crystals on her ce. Her legs are long and lither, with much speed packed into those muscles. Her paws are small and dainty with dark paw pads. One of her paws is a grey color that matches The mask on her ce. Her tail is a long slight plume with bits of grey strands in it.

Personality:

is a feisty she-warrior with a tonger like acid. She is not to kind but she isn't exactly mean either. She is easily annoyed so be careful not to say the wrong thing around her. She fights as well as she talks so make sure to stay on her good side. When shes in a good mood she can be fun and playful but catch her at the wrong time, shes not so nice. In a bad mood she is fiery and will snap at the first person that speaks to her. She is brave a stubborn, she doesn't like taking orders from someone she believes who is inferior to her. She is brave and loyal, she would never defy her clan or her clan leader. She is trustworthy and is not a n of lying or those who do lie for that matter.

She is wise about the well beings of others and would rather kill herself before putting anyone else in danger. She is selfless when it comes to the well being of others and there needs but that's one of her flaws. What she doesn't realize is that she needs to help herself sometimes. She is opinionated and wont take bad criticism from anyone. She sticks up for herself and others when needed and has sort f a neutral personality. Meaning that she could get along with just about anyone. She is feisty and strong and can take a stand when others need someone to look up to or look for advice wise.

History:

She was born and raised in Shadowclan. She was born from a litter of three, her being the only girl and the smallest of her other siblings. Her two brothers where given the names Sharpkit, for his sharp claws, he had dark brown fur and green eyes.Her other brother was Ashkit for his dark ashy colored fur, he to had green eyes. She was named Puppetkit because of her small and graceful look. There parents were Greystorm, there ther, big dark gray tom with green eyes, Willownight, their mother who was a pretty dark brown she-cat with blue eyes and black paws. As a kit Puppetkit was very hyper and loved to explore, which is usual for most kits. She often snuck out of camp with her brother Ashkit and got back without being caught. Sharpkit was more of a grouch and didn't want to do much besides play fight. Ashkit got along OK with him but Puppetkit didn't.

At the age of 6 moons her and her siblings were made into apprentices. Given the names Sharp-paw, Ashpaw, and Puppetpaw. Puppetpaw got a kind mentor named Heartshine, a pretty pale white she-cat with dark blue eyes. She thought her when to follow your heart or when to keep your nose out of others business. She was tough she-cat who had a dry sense of humor but meant well when it came to training. On the day of her assessment she went out hunting .

While out there she was attacked by a fox and Heartshine arrived in time to save her, but lost her life doing it. But because of her bravery she was going to get her ceremony. She grieved at the loss of her mentor but tried to be strong because that's what Heartshine would have wanted. She was given the name Puppetdance for her long legs that moved her gracefully.

As a warrior she kept to the code and fought well when needed, and put her best paw forward in tough situations, helping her clan whenever she could.

Other: Ill keep her a warrior instead. Ill make a deputy later =]

[Puresoul]

It's a good form, just a few spelling mistakes and one other issue. You see, UnityClan is like StarClan but older or something :P So you could change it to one of the normal Clans or something. But you can be deputy, of course, just write a bit about it in your history.

[Lilyfire~[♫]]

Puresoul, the Unityclan cats are dead. They can be any age.

But, Unityclan have never had kits until now, for the couple in Unityclan had kits who were born into the real forest below. Tell us how she died, how Lilyfire met her and took her to Unityclan, and her original clan please ^-^

[Puresoul]

no, I was just saying that the clan itself is really old, not necessarily the cats. but yeah, you can do either what I said or what lillyfire said, really x3

[Lilyfire~[♫]]

btw i aboslutely love Puppetdance's name ^^

[Puppet]

Changed! ill just put her in Shadowclan. I want her to be alive ^ ^ lol. And ill just make her warrior. If she was to be deputy id like her to have one litter before then so... x]

[Lilyfire~[♫]]

Accepted ^^

[Lilyfire~[♫]]

Puppetsoul has received the apprentice Dustpaw ^^